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First off, thank you for not positioning the flower dead center! I like the perspective/ angle you used because of the small DoF. This picture has potential and I have a couple of tips that may make it better :)

First, you might want to darken this picture by about one or two stops. That would allow the white petals to be exposed properly and for the yellow to be a tad more saturated.

Second, maybe try a different background? Right now it is sort of a grainy green color that is probably making the flower look worse. Maybe try a background with blurred lights, vibrant colors, or a simple black background?

So far you did a great job of picking the perspective and DoF and I hope that my little tips will help you :)
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the petals are very bright

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April 10, 2009
45.6 KB
37.3 KB
600×402

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D60
10/6400 second
F/10.0
105 mm
200
Apr 10, 2009, 2:47:00 AM

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